一、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以画龙点睛的作用。而且把短句段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体,要先用短句解释主要意思,然后在几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群,定会让主体妙笔生辉!文章结尾用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果稀里糊涂!不知所云!奉劝各位要写主题句,文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原则
讲话总是、点、点、点、、点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟条理清楚。考官们看文章也要关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、 短语优先原则
写作时,是在考试时,使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章亮点,老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不认识的短语,会看你低一等。相反,亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,凑字数,怎么办?用短语是办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
字数,表达也更。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章应该写的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词指那些比的词。比如说的时候,不应该之说nice空洞的词,应该使用诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、 多变句式原则
(1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又关系或者并列关系。
比如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 是二者并列的,可以用超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
(2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,阴险了点,可毕竟还容易让人。呢,说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, not with standing
(3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了女孩,然后我搭讪,然后去咖啡厅,然后认识了,然后了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候总要追求顺序,先,后,然后词就变得很常见了。其实词表示的是或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
(4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,不希望长成样子,可真的是了,也就会吸引别人的注意力。文章中的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
(5)附加(多此一举)
老婆,总会遇到的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,某某某,把老婆的话插入到的话里面,那定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成句子插入,whom or that 关键词要紧跟在先行词之前。
(6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,非要让你的文章精彩的话,那么我希望你引用个的排比句,个得对偶句,个的不定式,个地词,个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,是难的,并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的看看就可以领会,它分词的特殊,分词要求主语,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
您可出的句子,高分才怪!


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