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篇一:外研社杯写作比赛参赛文章

Variety is the Spice of Life

Nowadays,the transportation are more and more convenient,we can go someplace and visit some friends easily,but an increasing number of people always feel alone.The body is close,but how far is it from one soul to another?We feel alone,because we do not care much about what is happening around the world if it does not affect our personal lives.In my opinion, life is fine and enjoyable, yet you must learn to enjoy your fine life.It is stupid to just care about yourself.you should know that variety is the spice of life.So it is important to know events happening around the world, though sometimes they are unlikely to affect our daily life.

There are three points are in favor of my opinion.To begin with,it can help us realize our life value better.As old Chinese saying goes“ As a man,first,you should cultivate individual moral character, second,you should run the family unison, last,you should manage the nation in order, and peace will prevail throughout the universe”.It means that the highest value in life is to society.We own do not know ourself very much,if we just care about ourself,we can not find the value of our own.Life will be too smooth without excitement and interests.How boring the life will be!.If we know more events,we will find our life value easily.

Besides,to know events happening around the world can help us make more friends with others. and make our mind Sharper.If you know more,you can make friends with stranger easily because you can find common topic easily.

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Last but not the least,it can also help us live better.We can get all kinds of information from various events.For example,we can know that the price of vegetable will be high if you know that there is a flood in the vegetable production,so you can save a lot of money.That is fantastic!

In conclusion, variety is spice of life.To know more,and it will guide us into a better world for a better life.

程浩

大庆师范学院外国语学院

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篇二:2015外研社杯写作大赛冠军作文

写作丨冠军林远展议论文展示(另附13年冠军点评) 2015-12-23

2015“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛

议论文赛题

Can being positive backfire?

Optimism provides a multitude of benefits across many facets of life. Researchers have linked looking on the bright side to everything from improved pain tolerance to increased longevity. There’s nodenying the incredible power an optimistic outlook can have on our health,

relationships, and performance. But like much in life, it is possible to have too much of a good thing. There are some cases when an overly optimistic outlook can do more harm than good.

Suppose there is an online discussion forum on the topic “Can being positive backfire?” Write a post to the forum, clearly stating your opinion and supporting your ideas with specific reasons and examples. You should write about 800 words.

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选手解题思路

拿到题目之后,我足足看了三遍题目中的文本信息。其中,提到了两点:一是being positive;二是being overly positive。我自己的想法就是折中。 然后,开头明确提出自己的观点再以一个详例子和三个短例子对所持观点进行适当佐证。接着回到文本信息中的overly positive,对其提出反对和批评,并选取一个例子进行佐证,证明为什么要反对overly positive。

最后是对整体的总结,明确表达自己对题目 “Can being positive backfire?”的看法。

冠军议论文赏析

注:文章为从系统摘出的原生作品,目的是为了展现出选手三个小时内的写作风貌,可能存在部分拼写错误,仅供学习分享使用。

Emotions are miscellaneous, such as optimism and pessimisism; merriment and sorrow; excitement and despondency;... Human beings are inherently

emotional and emotions do play a significant role in our actions and attitudes. We may encounter some personal tragedies or sufferings, but the actions and attitudes we take might differ. For example, being moderately positive means that we can keep a sanguine outlook on our experience; means that we can transmute the negative feelings into a positive attitude towards our frustration; means that we can look the unpleasant matters in a positive light and tackle them with great

resilience. Personally, I espouse bing a moderately positive individual.

Hellen Keller, who was blind and deaf, became a celebrated writers with unflagging belief in herself and unyielding willpower. In front of Hellen Keller, there lied two options: either live live to its fullest or wither away like the autumn leaves. Instead of capitulating to the sheer darkness and silence, she harbored prodigious fortitude to vanquish the personal trageies and sufferings. Under the assistance of her teacher Anne, she learnt Braille and writing. After reading a sea of books, Hellen Keller soaked up all the quintessence and wisdom of other writers and attempted to write her own. The spirit of never being pessimistic sustained her in the most darkest hours of her life and she rose like a shinging star in the firmament of writing. Her teacher also held a positive belief in Hellen so she resolved to help Hellen face life positively.

There are innumerable other examplars of being moderately positive. Thomas Edison, by dint of a postive mindset and unwavering pursuit, invented the most endurable and suitable material to make the incandescent bulb which marked the inauguration of the electrical era. Madame Curie, by virtue of a optimistic attitude and steadfast tenacity, extracted an infinitesimal amount of radium from tons of impure materials after three-year-and-nine-month experiment and advocated to use radioisotope to cure cancer which rendered humanity a powerful weapon to fight against the fatal disease. Hua Luogeng, a renowned Chinesesmethematician, metamorphosed into a math master by holding a positive outlook and unswerving doggedness.

It's not hard to find the common denominator of the brilliant and reverent giants: a positive outlook towards the sufferings and failures.

Being moderately positive will arm us with an effective weapon to repel the enemies of negative feelings that will hold us back and become a stumbling block on the way ahead. It will bolster up our belief and confidence in the face of the mishaps and torments and we will possess a more optimistic perspective to the life tragedies. Being moderately

positive is like a beacon light of hope which will illuminate our way ahead and resembles a lighthouse which show us the path when we are disoriented. Then all the darkness will fade away and crumble into dust. Being

moderately positive is the inner force which propels you froward in the teeth of setback and hurdles. We will ooze confidence and persistence no matter how tough the situation is.

Nevertheless, we are supposed to put the positive mindset in perspective, which means we need to understand it in the appropriate and right way. Here the positive mindset is a moderately positive one, not overly optimistic. Anything that is too much will backfire. The last emperor of Shang Dynasty was being too sanguine and optimistic and believed that his kingdom was impregnable and was never to be toppled by others. Thus he sank into the debauched and promiscuous lifestyle, listened to the malign suggestions of his diabolical officers and precluded any good suggestions from being sent to him. The decadence and depravity eventually led to his downfall and his power was nullified and compromised. This renders us a good lesson that we shall never become overly optimistic about our lives, works, conditions and circumstances because undue and inordinate optimism led to the complacent and smug mentality. It is always counterproductive.

Individuals should always strive for the better selves rather than rest and wallow in self-contentment when the achievements are made. That is why being overly optimistic should be deprecated and criticized.

So, what we need to do is to differentiate the positive mind from the overly-optimistic one, for there is a blurry line between these two. Our capacity to distinguish between them must be acuqired by constant failures and attempts. Always being moderately positive is not an easy task and trying to keep it is even much harder. Sometimes we will become disheartened and lose all the hope; sometimes we will enjoy the

exhilaration of being successful and then get obsessed with the current achievements. Through failures, we can have a much clearer interpretation of being moderately postive. And this is a long process that should be covered step by step and brick by brick.

Can being positive backfaire? I cannot answer in the affirmative. But add "moderately" to the sentence: Can being moderately positive backfire? My answer is definitely NO.

往届选手点评

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对于议论文来说,审题永远都是重中之重。而其实审题也是最具趣味性的,品味题目的引导性,琢磨关键词带来的启发。这篇议论文的题目恰恰就是这种非常吸引人的类型。读到疑问句的标题“Can being positive backfire?”让人耳目一新。通常提到乐观主义,大家想到的可能都是其种种好处。题目材料第一段也顺着读者的思路写出了乐观使人长寿、助人成功等等。但笔锋一转,材料第一段最后两句给出了这篇文章的关键:乐极可能生悲。关键词是“Overly optimistic outlook”。分析到这里可能对于许多同学来说,这道题的谜已经解了。乐观是好的,但乐到极端则会有害。因此推断只有适度乐观才是解决办法,就如白马非马。材料第二段则为硬性的要求:字数限制,陈述观点并提供支持的材料、理由或实例。

从内容上说,作者的这篇文章内容详实,论据有力。第一段虽并没有开门见山,而是谈论了人性情多变,乐观有其独特的好处。但第一段结尾给出了明确的论点:Personally, I espouse being a moderately positive individual.这里如果观察仔细的话就能发现作者的高明之处在于对题目的回应。作者作出了回应并没有逃避冲突,但绝不是盲目的回应是或否,而是有条件的回应。“moderately” 这个副词的出现体现了作者审题的功力。立论之后就要提供论据来支持论点。作者分别选取了海伦凯勒和居里夫人作为主要的正面实例。接下来的过渡段非常巧妙的总结了她们成功的众多因素中的“公分母”是乐观的态度。并进一步引出证实了适度的乐观确实对人大有裨益。而接下来笔锋一转到了驳论的阶段,过度乐观有怎样的害处呢?作者举了商纣王荒淫无度、贪图享乐最终家破国亡的例子给人以警示,也充分证明了过度乐观的害处。那我们究竟该如何做呢?作者在倒数

第二段提议我们应在成功和挫折中学会调适、适度乐观。文章最后一段意味深长,回应论点,整篇文章显示了作者严密的逻辑和辩证的思维。

语言运用也是该文章一大亮点。词汇丰富,运用自如。比如:prodigious

fortitude, unswerving doggedness, mishaps and torments和setbacks and hurdles 等短语充分体现了作者高端词汇运用的娴熟。而像Braille,

radioisotope和the incandescent bulb等不常用的技术型的词汇体现了作者词汇量之大。除此之外,作者句式运用灵活多变,长短句交叉结合非常老练。作者还尤其擅长使用修辞,文章中大量使用排比,对偶和比喻等修辞手法,都体现了作者深厚的语言功底。

从结构来看,整个谋篇布局一气呵成。开头给出论点。主体明晰,立论有据,驳论有力。结论明确,首尾呼应。三大部分之间的过度和衔接也非常自然。组织顺序合理,再一次提醒大家提纲的重要性。

不得不承认,这是一篇难得的好议论文,各方面都可圈可点,尤其是作者既有男选手擅长的缜密的逻辑,又有优美精确的语言实在难得。当然,看到各闪光点的同时也要注意到细节的不完美。比如,作者有多处拼写错误,冠词使用不当等。但瑕不掩瑜,短短三个小时的时间,好文章倚马可待,相信作者完成这样一篇美文落笔划上句点时应该是幸福得让人羡慕吧。写作大赛冠军林远展决赛记叙文展示

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2015“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛

words.

An Unexpected Guest

Riya was terrified when she heard the news on television that an alien spaceship had landed in her city. As a precaution, her father closed all the doors and windows.

Though everyone was asleep, Riya could not sleep a wink. The thought of aliens in her city kept her mind racing. It was almost midnight when she heard the door bell ring.

By now she was really scared. She ran towards the door but her father

instructed her to go back to bed. She pretended to go towards her room, but hid behind the sofa and watched her father open the door.

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When her father opened the door, a human-like alien was standing outside the house, looking weary and exhausted in the faint light radiated from the house. Her father stepped back to the house instinctively. "Please don't be afraid. My name is Carson and I come from another planet outside of the solar system," Carson replied with a unusual voice, similar to the alien-like voice heared on the television. "We are not your enemies and won't do any harm to human 记叙文赛题 Read the beginning of the story below and complete the story in 600-800

篇三:2015“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛 写作 大赛阅读大赛

关于举办2015“外研社杯”全国英语

演讲大赛/写作大赛/阅读大赛的赛事通知

一、大赛介绍

“‘外研社杯’全国英语演讲大赛”、“‘外研社杯’全国英语写作大赛”和“‘外研社杯’全国英语阅读大赛”是由外语教学与研究出版社和教育部高等学校大学外语教学指导委员会、教育部高等学校英语专业教学指导分委员会联合举办的公益大赛。

(一)演讲大赛

“‘外研社杯’全国英语演讲大赛”于2002年创办,在国内外广受关注,已成为全国参赛人数最多、规模最大、水平最高的英语演讲赛事。

(二)写作大赛

“‘外研社杯’全国英语写作大赛”于2012年启动,旨在推动英语写作教学,提高学生英语写作水平,引领高校外语写作教学的改革与发展。

(三)阅读大赛

“‘外研社杯’全国英语阅读大赛”于2015年全新举办,旨在通过比赛的形式,激发大学生的英语学习热情,为他们提供阅读实践的机会和自我挑战的舞台。

三项大赛以高远的立意和创新的理念,汇聚全国优秀学子,竞技英语表达与沟通艺术。同一赛场,三个舞台,既各具特色,又互促互进,为全国大学生提供展示外语能力、沟通能力与思辨能力的综合平台。

二、主办单位

外语教学与研究出版社

三、承办单位

河南理工大学外国语学院

四、参赛资格

全国具有高等学历教育招生资格的普通高等学校在校本、专科学生、研究生(不包括在职研究生),35岁以下,中国国籍。

五、报名方式

参加“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛/写作大赛/阅读大赛的选手,请认真阅读各参赛须知,填写参赛报名表:详见附表。

2013、2014级学生请以班级为单位将电子版报名汇总表发给大学英语任课教师。

其他年级学生请将电子版报名表发送至邮箱[email protected]。(同一班级或专业最好汇总一下统一发送。)

注意:报名表请直接粘贴到邮件正文里,请勿发送附件(详见附表)。

六、截止日期

所有选手报名截止时间:2015年7月5日下午5时前。

七、参赛注册

大赛官方网站()将于2015年6月10日起开放注册窗口。所有报名参赛的选手必须在大赛官网注册,填写个人信息。参赛选手在大赛网站注册时所用的电子邮箱及手机号将作为参加模拟赛和大赛的复赛、决赛时登录大赛系统的重要认证信息。没有注册的选手无法参加复赛。参赛选手注册的个人信息须准确、真实。如经组委会查证与真实情况不符,将取消其参赛资格。

八、联系方式

联系电话:0391-3987778

大赛官方网站:

河南理工大学外国语学院

2015年6月8日

附件 1. 2015“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛参赛须知

2. 2015“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛参赛须知

3. 2015“外研社杯”全国英语阅读大赛参赛须知

4.参赛报名表

2015“‘外研社杯’全国英语演讲大赛”包括“地面赛场”和“网络赛场”两种形式。

一、地面赛场

初 赛

比赛方式:定题演讲,演讲题目视频请见大赛官网 比赛时间:2015年9月。(详情请关注校园网最新公告)。 比赛地点:河南理工大学

复 赛

组织方式:以省为单位,由各省大学外语教学研究会组织成立复赛组委会,承办复赛。

比赛时间:2015年11月2日前须完成复赛,

决 赛

参赛资格:各省复赛前3名选手,以及网络赛场前30名选手。比赛地点:北京

比赛时间:2015年12月5日—11日

二、网络赛场

“网络赛场”在大赛官网进行,除通过“地面赛场”获得决赛资格的选手外,所有符合大赛参赛资格的选手均可报名参赛,排名前30的选手有资格参加全国决赛。具体要求请登陆大赛官网查看。

初 赛

比赛方式:现场写作,不允许携带电子设备,不允许使用网络。 比赛时间:2015年9月(详情请关注校园网最新公告)。 比赛地点:河南理工大学

复 赛

各初赛赛点的特等奖获奖选手进入复赛。

复赛时间:2015年10月17日、10月24日、10月31日,时间均为9:00-11:00。同一时间比赛的省采用相同赛题。

比赛题目:比赛开始时当场公布。赛题为议论文写作1篇、说明文写作1篇,每篇长度为500词左右,写作时间共两小时。

比赛方式:现场写作,使用大赛专用写作评阅系统进行操作。比赛不允许携带电子设备,不允许使用网络。

决 赛

复赛结束后,各省大学外语教学研究会将获得决赛资格的3名选手向大赛组委会秘书处报名参加全国决赛。大赛组委会不接受选手个人直接报名。

比赛地点:北京

比赛时间:2015年12月9日9:00-12:00

比赛方式:现场写作,使用大赛专用写作评阅系统进行操作。比赛不允许携带电子设备,不允许使用网络。组委会统一提供词典。

“‘外研社杯’全国英语阅读大赛”分为“模拟赛”和“大赛”两个阶段。

一、模拟赛

正式比赛前,大赛组委会将举办模拟赛。学生自愿报名,在大赛官方网站注册后直接参加模拟赛。

比赛时间:模拟赛比赛时间为一个半小时。2015年度模拟赛具体比赛时间将在大赛官网上公布,敬请关注。

比赛方式:登录大赛官方网站,在“外研社杯”全国英语阅读大赛赛事系统中线上参赛。每次模拟赛持续三天,选手可以在三天内选择任意时间上网参加模拟赛。(详情见每次模拟赛具体通知。)

二、大赛

初 赛

比赛方式:现场阅读,不允许携带电子设备,不允许使用网络。 比赛时间:2015年9月

比赛地点:河南理工大学。

详情请关注校园网最新公告。

复 赛

组织方式:以省为单位,各初赛赛点的特等奖获奖选手进入复赛。比赛时间:2015年10月17日、10月24日、10月31日,时间 均为14:00-16:00。同一时间比赛的省采用相同赛题。

比赛方式:登录“外研社杯”全国英语阅读大赛赛事系统,现场线上答题。

决 赛

参赛资格:各省复赛特等奖获奖选手(限3人)。

比赛地点:北京。

比赛时间:2015年12月9日。

比赛方式:登录“外研社杯”全国英语阅读大赛赛事系统,现场线上答题。


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